tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5476730004313119421.post1845103922429962243..comments2022-11-01T00:47:02.941-07:00Comments on Maria Eschbach's EDM 310 Class Blog: Blog Post #3Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05136663377655302630noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5476730004313119421.post-62630271482263219462012-11-04T14:00:49.926-08:002012-11-04T14:00:49.926-08:00Maria,
I like the fact that you want to know wher...Maria, <br />I like the fact that you want to know where you are making your mistakes so that you can correct them or not make the same mistake. I also like the app you chose. I think this app would also be great for elemetary students who are learning about writing complete sentences. I saw only a few miskates such as when you were dicussing technology in special education "it hurt them later in life" you changed from present tense to past. In the same paragraph you wrote "The video pointed out that the students re more interested and involved in their schoolwork." and I didn't know if the "re" was suppose to be were. Other than that everything looked great and I really enjoyed reading your blog. Chelsea Calverthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15308752415635242974noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5476730004313119421.post-64313375789161017032012-09-24T05:57:53.392-07:002012-09-24T05:57:53.392-07:00Thank you for drawing this to my attention. There ...Thank you for drawing this to my attention. There were two paragraphs on the two sections that required it. One I forgot to put a line break on it, and the other it was there but the paragraph before went so long one could not tell it was a new paragraph. Thank you. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05136663377655302630noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5476730004313119421.post-89651719961494028852012-09-22T12:35:41.304-07:002012-09-22T12:35:41.304-07:00Maria,
I like the app you chose. It is very crea...Maria,<br /><br />I like the app you chose. It is very creative. Be sure to have two paragraphs per section. Some of your paragraphs were really long so that would be equivalent to two paragraphs but some were just slightly short. It seems you have found the links on peer editing helpful. Keep up the good work. Elizabethhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12695854623837877972noreply@blogger.com