tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5476730004313119421.post2393644319000994479..comments2022-11-01T00:47:02.941-07:00Comments on Maria Eschbach's EDM 310 Class Blog: Blog Post #9Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05136663377655302630noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5476730004313119421.post-73123938381609968342012-11-05T13:28:11.713-08:002012-11-05T13:28:11.713-08:00Maria,
Good post. Well summarized. Points were m...Maria, <br /><br />Good post. Well summarized. Points were made. All that jazz. Found one error: "Yet Mr. McClung gives us an insight on what his struggles were with I thought was refreshing." <br />"with" should be ", which" <br />After a noun, using a phrase with "which" one must have a comma after the noun being described. <br /><br />Nice work overall. Bailey Hammondhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17505691354665640718noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5476730004313119421.post-83651417662986652342012-10-30T06:45:43.227-07:002012-10-30T06:45:43.227-07:00I enjoyed reading your blog post. I did see some g...I enjoyed reading your blog post. I did see some grammatical errors. In the sentence "It is not that I did not enjoy the blog,..." I think you should rephrase how you say that. But over all I can see that you learned a lot from reading his blog posts. Good job!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02386459736736277402noreply@blogger.com